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Hi, Michelle!
Finally! You were able to do your homework on the website, and thank you for that. It's nice to know that you were able to visit famous places in the United States. I hope you had fun there, too!
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1.I went to disneyland
>> CORRECT
2.I went to san francisco
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3,I wen t to (solvang)  the city is small but pretty and famous for bread so delicious
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