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What\'s more important; job enjoyment or high salary?

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Unfortunately, it's hard to catch two birds with one stone. The best is that I get both a high salary and job enjoyment. If I have to choose only one, it may be a job satisfaction. I want to live my life without forcing myself because of money.
Frankly speaking, I feel like I'm living that life with forcing myself because of high salary. But in my mind, I always want to live with job enjoyment.

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Hello, Seo Yeon!~
When both of them are things you want, it's never easy to decide between them. But you were right with the phrase "You cannot kill two birds with one stone" If that were the case, life would be easy to live with ~.~
Chammy

Unfortunately, it's hard to catch two birds with one stone. 
The best is that I get both a high salary and job enjoyment. 
>> correct
If I have to choose only one, it may be a job satisfaction.
>> If I have to choose only one, it may be job satisfaction.
 I want to live my life without forcing myself because of money.
OR
>> I want to live my life freely, without being forced to do so by financial constraints.
Frankly speaking, I feel like I'm living that life with forcing myself because of high salary.
>> Frankly speaking, I feel like I'm living that life of forcing myself for a high salary.
 But in my mind, I always want to live with job enjoyment.
OR
>> However, I constantly envision myself living with happiness in my job.
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