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If you could switch jobs, what job would you choose to do?

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2024-11-08 27

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I always consider about that.
Because I didn't have been any what I want to be, since I was young.
My mom told me to be teacher. But I did't want to be,
So I always support to my son's dreams, whatever he wants.
When I had to decide to my carrer path, I told my mom that I wanted to be dog groomer because I like dogs, at that time.
But I saw my mom's face that she didn't want.
However, I knew what she worried about. It was not usual.
I understand why she want me to be teacher, ever then and now.
I couldn't persist to be like it.
So,If it is possible now, I want to be like zookeeper.
I know what caring other one is too hard and need much patient.
Also, I might be keep working at now company.

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Hi, Stella! I am a bit surprised to know that you wanted to be a zookeeper. It¡¯s not a job I would usually hear people wanting to do. It¡¯s never too late to pursue your dream job. It¡¯s also okay to pursue a different career. Choose whatever you think is best. ^^
~T. Jewel
I always consider about that.
>>I always consider that.
Because I didn't have been any what I want to be, since I was young.
>>Because I haven't been who I wanted to be since I was young.
My mom told me to be teacher. But I did't want to be,
>>My mom told me to be a teacher, but I didn¡¯t want to be one.
So I always support to my son's dreams, whatever he wants.
>>So I always support my son's dreams, whatever he wants.
When I had to decide to my carrer path, I told my mom that I wanted to be dog groomer because I like dogs, at that time.
>>When I had to decide on my career path, I told my mom that I wanted to be a dog groomer because I liked dogs at that time.
But I saw my mom's face that she didn't want.
>>But I saw my mom's face, and she didn¡¯t seem to want that.
However, I knew what she worried about. It was not usual.
>>However, I knew what she was worried about. It wasn't usual.
I understand why she want me to be teacher, ever then and now.
>>I understand why she wanted me to be a teacher, both then and now.
I couldn't persist to be like it.
>>I just couldn¡¯t seem to like it.
So,If it is possible now, I want to be like zookeeper.
>>So, if it's possible now, I want to be a zookeeper.
I know what caring other one is too hard and need much patient.
>>I know that caring for others is too hard and requires a lot of patience.
Also, I might be keep working at now company.
>>Also, I might keep working at my current company.
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