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I\'m terrible at negotiating when shopping :(

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I'm not good at negotiating when shopping offline, especially traditional market, because I don't have enough information.

There are many cases that people get ripped off when they buy raw fish at the Korean fish markets.
I can also get ripped off in fish markets because I don't know how price of raw fish is enough!

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Hello, Min!

Shopping in the traditional marker needs a lot of experiences. If you do not know the local price, they can really rip you off and lose money.

It is sad that some do this. Perhaps, life has become more difficult these days.

Anyway, a job well done here on your answer. Please take note of the word arrangements. Thank you for doing this homework!

See you in your next composition!

-T. Donna~

I'm not good at negotiating when shopping offline, especially traditional market, because I don't have enough information.
>> Correct! 
Or: I'm not good at negotiating when shopping offline, especially in the traditional market, because I don't have enough information.

There are many cases that people get ripped off when they buy raw fish at the Korean fish markets.
>> Correct!

I can also get ripped off in fish markets because I don't know how price of raw fish is enough!
>> I can also get ripped off in fish markets because I don't know how much the price of raw fish is!

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