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Hi Divina Teacher.
Happy Wednesday.
Thank you giving me homework.
Homework
What do you think about helping without asking for anything in return?
My answer
If there are the situation to my family and best friend, I will help it.
and I won't ask for anything in return or I won't hope in return.
26p homework part 2
Have you ever assisted anyone in behalf of a friend?
My answer
When my friend needed a lot of money, I lent it to my friend.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon! 

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. If there are the situation to my family and best friend, I will help it.
>>If there is any situation affecting my family and best friend, I will do something about it.

2. and I won't ask for anything in return or I won't hope in return.
>>I won't ask or hope for anything in return.

3. When my friend needed a lot of money, I lent it to my friend.
>>CORRECT!
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