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Introduce myself

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Hello My name is Gloria Jeong.
I'm 32 years old. After 2 month, I will be 33 years old. Time flies so fast.,so little sad about it.
I majojred in English, but I think that I;m very not good at speaking English, so I decided to joint the Power English class with Catch.
Learing English with Catchy is makes me believe that I can speak more fluently than I think.
Now I don't have worry when I saying English.
My final goal is proceeding presentation or discussion with the company coworker with English, therefore I have to try my best to study English.

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Hello Gloria,

Thank you for sharing your introduction! You did a great job, and I¡¯m really proud of the progress you¡¯ve made so far. It¡¯s amazing to see how confident you¡¯re becoming in speaking English, and I love that you have a clear goal to improve. Keep believing in yourself-you¡¯re definitely on the right track!

We will keep practicing together in our upcoming classes to help you get even better. I¡¯m sure you¡¯ll continue to improve and reach your goals!

Great job, and keep up the hard work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Hello My name is Gloria Jeong.

>>Hello, my name is Gloria Jeong.

I'm 32 years old. After 2 month, I will be 33 years old.

>>I'm 32 years old. I will turn 33 years old after two months.

Time flies so fast.,so little sad about it.

>>Time flies so fast, and I'm a little sad about it.

I majojred in English, but I think that I;m very not good at speaking English, so I decided to joint the Power English class with Catch.

>>I majored in English, but I think I'm not very good at speaking English, so I decided to join Power English with Cathy.

Learing English with Catchy is makes me believe that I can speak more fluently than I think.

>>Learning English with Cathy makes me believe that I can speak more fluently than I think.

Now I don't have worry when I saying English.

>>Now I don't have to worry when I speak English.

My final goal is proceeding presentation or discussion with the company coworker with English, therefore I have to try my best to study English.

>>My final goal is to give presentations or have discussions with my coworkers in English, so I have to do my best to study English.

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