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What part does luck play in success?

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2024-11-06 190

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I think luck only plays a very small part in success.
In other words, luck is minor factor in success.
Like a suddenly rich man, you can be successful with a moment of luck, but I don't think it well end well.
There is a saying in Korea, "Chances come to those who are prepared."
As the sentence means, luck doesn't affect success muck because opportunities will come to the prepared person.
If a prepared person takes the opportunity and not only makes good use of that opportunity, but also has luck, success can be achieved.
Therefore, I think effort and preparation are more important than luck.

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Hello, Yun!~
I definitely agree that we should not rely on luck. We sometimes assume that our success is the result of luck. However, I believe that we accomplish success when we fulfill our role or take action. ^_^
Chammy
I think luck only plays a very small part in success.
>>Correct 
In other words, luck is minor factor in success.
>> In other words, luck is a minor factor in success.
Like a suddenly rich man, you can be successful with a moment of luck, but I don't think it well end well.
>> Like a sudden rich man, you can be successful with a moment of luck, but I don't think it will end well.
OR
>> You could be successful and become rich in an instant because of luck but I don't think it will last. 
There is a saying in Korea, "Chances come to those who are prepared."
>>Correct 
As the sentence means, luck doesn't affect success muck because opportunities will come to the prepared person.
>> As the sentence means, luck doesn't muck success because opportunities will come to the prepared person.
Or
>> As the saying implies, opportunities will present themselves to the well-prepared one, therefore luck has no bearing on achievement.
If a prepared person takes the opportunity and not only makes good use of that opportunity but also has luck, success can be achieved.
Or
>>A prepared person can succeed if they seize the chance and use it well in addition to having good fortune.
Therefore, I think effort and preparation are more important than luck.
>>Correct 

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