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I think it is true especially for nowadays.
As AI development has been mature and so fast, more and more jobs are waiting for being replaced by it even if minimum wage would not be increased.
It could bring the companies meaningful retrenchment of expenditure, even the efficiency and accuracy.
If the government raise the minimum wage, it will accelerate this process.
Many fast food restaurants and coffee shops already have order&paying machines as a result from that.

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Hey, Ms. Anna! You make a valid point about the rapid advancement of AI and its impact on jobs. It¡¯s interesting to see how companies are adopting technology for efficiency, but it raises important questions about employment and the future of work.
~T. Jenna

I think it is true especially for nowadays.
>>I think it is true, especially nowadays.
As AI development has been mature and so fast, more and more jobs are waiting for being replaced by it even if minimum wage would not be increased.
>>As AI development has matured so fast or rapidly, more and more jobs are waiting to be replaced by it, even if the minimum wage is not increased.
It could bring the companies meaningful retrenchment of expenditure, even the efficiency and accuracy.
>>It could bring meaningful retrenchment of expenditure to companies, as well as improved efficiency and accuracy.
OR
>>It could facilitate substantial cost savings for organizations, concomitantly fostering elevated efficiency and precision in operations.
If the government raise the minimum wage, it will accelerate this process
>>If the government raises the minimum wage, it will accelerate this process.
OR
>>If the government were to increase the minimum wage, it would expedite this process.
Many fast food restaurants and coffee shops already have order&paying machines as a result from that.
>>Many fast food restaurants and coffee shops already have order and payment machines as a result

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