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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: In some countries, it is traditional for women to change their names when they get married. What do you think about this?

answer:
I've been thought about it, I think I feel like I've lose my identity.
In the case of Korea, women not to change name when get married but kids name follow father's name.
Actually I felt so unfair, being taken away, I don't know why..

Even now, sometimes she asks about family name, but it's very  difficult and complicated to explain it.

There days, many people use their mother's name and father's names together.
So if my daughter wants to changes the family name when she grows up, I want to give him a chance.

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Hello, Ms. Nala! I agree with you. It could seem unfair to women as they were the ones who carried and gave birth to their children. But, it's a patriarchal tradition that is rooted from many years ago in some countries.
-T. Sonny
I've been thought about it, I think I feel like I've lose my identity.
>>I've been thinking about it, and I feel like I would've lost my identity.
In the case of Korea, women not to change name when get married but kids name follow father's name.
>>In case of Koreans, women do not change their names when they get married but their kids take their father's last name.
Actually I felt so unfair, being taken away, I don't know why..
>>Actually, it felt so unfair and seemed like they were being taken away from me but I don't know why.
Even now, sometimes she asks about family name, but it's very  difficult and complicated to explain it.
>>Even now, sometimes, my daughter asks about her 
family name, but it's tough and complicated to explain.
There days, many people use their mother's name and father's names together.
>>These days, many people use a combination of their mother's and father's names.
So if my daughter wants to changes the family name when she grows up, I want to give him a chance.
>>So, if my daughter wants to change her family name when grows up, I want to give her a chance.


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