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I think smile can sometimes say more than words. We have "Silent is gold", "To keep up save words" in Korea. Sometimes smile is appropriate more than thousand of words.When I smile in the right place at the right time It could be good influence. Also smile is good expression. It's good for health and sociability. I'm not smiling because I'm happy, I'm happy because I'm smiling.

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I think smile can sometimes say more than words. 
>> I think a smile can sometimes speak more than words. 

We have "Silent is gold", "To keep up save words" in Korea. 
>> We have sayings in Korea such as "Silence is gold" and "To keep up, save your words."

Sometimes smile is appropriate more than thousand of words. 
>> Sometimes a smile is more appropriate than thousands of words. 

When I smile in the right place at the right time It could be good influence. 
>> When I smile in the right place at the right time it could be a good influence. 

Also smile is good expression. 
>> Also, smiling is a good expression. 

It's good for health and sociability. 
>> It's good for health and socializing. 

I'm not smiling because I'm happy, I'm happy because I'm smiling.
>> CORRECT 

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