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What do you think is the best way to avoid annoying people with our greetings?

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Be polite and have a smile face can avoid annoying people with our greetings. Normal people can feel safe and comfortable when other people is smiling. And As long as the voice is warm and polite, they can think that the other person is favorable to ourselves. Therefore I believe the good way not to hurt the other person's feelings with greetings is be nice and smiling.

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Hey, Lin! Absolutely! A warm smile and polite greetings can make such a positive difference. It helps everyone feel comfortable and valued. Great thoughts!
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Be polite and have a smile face can avoid annoying people with our greetings. 
>>Being polite and having a smiling face can help avoid annoying people with our greetings.
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>>Maintaining politeness and a cheerful demeanor can prevent our greetings from coming across as bothersome to others.
Normal people can feel safe and comfortable when other people is smiling. 
>>Normal people can feel safe and comfortable when other people are smiling.
OR
>>Individuals often feel safe and at ease when others are smiling.
And As long as the voice is warm and polite, they can think that the other person is favorable to ourselves. 
>>And as long as the voice is warm and polite, they will perceive the other person as favorable to them.
OR
>>As long as the tone is warm and courteous, individuals will view the other person as friendly and approachable.
Therefore, I believe the good way not to hurt the other person's feelings with greetings is be nice and smiling.
>>Therefore, I believe that one of the good ways to avoid hurting another person's feelings with greetings is to be nice and smile.
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>>Therefore, I believe that the most effective way to avoid hurting someone¡¯s feelings with greetings is to be kind and smile warmly.
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