¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Have you ever hosted a family gathering at your home? What was the experience like?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*Àº
2024-10-29 453

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Yes, I have been.
when I was a little, my families was gather at our home on chu-seok and Lunar new year.
Me and mother, grandmother made korea traditional foods.
It was fun and happy moment.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

That sounds wonderful, Anna! Celebrating Chuseok and Lunar New Year with your family must have created such happy memories. It's so special to prepare traditional Korean foods together with your mother and grandmother. Those moments are truly priceless!
~Kelly^^
Yes, I have been.
>> Yes, I have.
>> Yes, I have hosted a family gathering.
when I was a little, my families was gather at our home on chu-seok and Lunar new year.
>> When I was little, my family would gather at our home on Chuseok and Lunar New Year.
Me and mother, grandmother made korea traditional foods.
>> My mother, grandmother, and I made traditional Korean foods.
It was fun and happy moment.
>> Correct
OR:
>> It was a fun and happy moment.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
141035 Homework ÀÌ*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 166
141034 Why do people get nervous in job interviews? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 69
141033 Do you have a favorite item in your collection? What is it, and... ÀÓ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 73
141032 Homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 66
141031 Homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 164
141030 What are the consequences of spending less time interacting... ¾È*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 174
141029 I think there are more advantage than disadvantage. ÀÌ*Çü ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 2
141028 Music ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 70
141027 Page.51 ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-11-18 80
141026 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 1
141025 How do you feel about the idea of \\ Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 2
141024 Who is the healthiest person you know? What do they do to stay... Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 85
141023 People get exercise while playing sports. Which sports are the... Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 86
141022 How do you begin your day? Write about it. Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 83
141021 Do you think it\'s important to have a buddy? Why or why not? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 1
141020 Are you close to your neighbors? How do you get along with them? Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 85
141019 People ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 88
141018 Dolphinsdoll ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 93
141017 When do you prefer having a family gathering? ±è*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 88
141016 the bood and the movie ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-11-17 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04