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Have you ever hosted a family gathering at your home? What was the experience like?

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Yes, I have been.
when I was a little, my families was gather at our home on chu-seok and Lunar new year.
Me and mother, grandmother made korea traditional foods.
It was fun and happy moment.

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That sounds wonderful, Anna! Celebrating Chuseok and Lunar New Year with your family must have created such happy memories. It's so special to prepare traditional Korean foods together with your mother and grandmother. Those moments are truly priceless!
~Kelly^^
Yes, I have been.
>> Yes, I have.
>> Yes, I have hosted a family gathering.
when I was a little, my families was gather at our home on chu-seok and Lunar new year.
>> When I was little, my family would gather at our home on Chuseok and Lunar New Year.
Me and mother, grandmother made korea traditional foods.
>> My mother, grandmother, and I made traditional Korean foods.
It was fun and happy moment.
>> Correct
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