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I have my own business, so I can put aside some time to do what I want to do. Actually when I go abroad for traveling, I adjust my daily schedule and hand my responsibilities to my daughters. However, it is not always possible. When we have to prepare for our students' exams, I can't help staying at my academy supporting the instructors. Though, I can enjoy leisure time every morning and every weekend. Hopefully, I'll have more time to do what I want to do next year ~

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Hi, Gi Yean!
It's nice to know that even when you are running your own academy, you still have enough time to do the things you like. Also, I'm happy to know that you have people you trust, like your daughters, to take over your tasks when you travel. I think they are a very big factor in why you can do what you want, too.
- T. Caitlyn 
I have my own business, so I can put aside some time to do what I want to do. 
>> CORRECT
Actually when I go abroad for traveling, I adjust my daily schedule and hand my responsibilities to my daughters. 
>> Actually, when I travel abroad, I adjust my daily schedule and hand over my responsibilities to my daughters.
However, it is not always possible. 
>> CORRECT
When we have to prepare for our students' exams, I can't help staying at my academy supporting the instructors. 
>> CORRECT
Though, I can enjoy leisure time every morning and every weekend. 
>> However, I can enjoy leisure time every morning and every weekend.
Hopefully, I'll have more time to do what I want to do next year
>> CORRECT
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