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Should student be required to do volunteer work ?

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I agree. Because if we will go to mountain and do volunteer work, Our earth will be clean and safe and there won't be much waste on the earth. for example we will clean waste and planting trees so the air become very clean and we wil become healthy.

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Hi, Ryan!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


I agree. 
>> CORRECT!
Because if we will go to mountain and do volunteer work, Our earth will be clean and safe and there won't be much waste on the earth. 
>> It's because if we go to the mountain and do volunteer work, our earth will be clean and safe, and there won't be much waste on the earth. 
for example we will clean waste and planting trees so the air become very clean and we wil become healthy.
>> For example, we will clean waste and plant trees so the air would become very clean and we wil become healthier.
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