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Do you agree with the statement \"Failure is the most effective teacher\"? Why or why not?

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I thoroughly agree this statement. If I failed something, l knew that this way was wrong. So I never go this way. If I have many failure, I also have small risk. But I don't like failure. When I failed, this situation make me discourage. It is very hard overcoming. But I think that if I lose one, I can get one. We don't have to be afraid. If I have many failure, it is I have many experience. So failure is not bed.

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 Hello Eva,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the idea that "Failure is the most effective teacher." I really like how you explained that failures help you learn what not to do in the future. It's completely normal to feel down when things don't go as planned, and I appreciate your honesty about that. Your point about how losing something can lead to new opportunities is really encouraging. It shows that you understand how important it is to keep trying, even when things get tough. Remember, each failure can teach you something valuable. Keep pushing forward, and don't be afraid to embrace those challenges!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I thoroughly agree this statement.

>>I thoroughly agree with this statement.

If I failed something, l knew that this way was wrong.

>>If I fail something, I'll know that this path is wrong.

So I never go this way.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So I never take this route.

If I have many failure, I also have small risk.

>>If I experience many failures, I also take small risks.

But I don't like failure.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I don't like failing.

When I failed, this situation make me discourage.

>>If I fail, I will be discouraged about this situation.

It is very hard overcoming.

>>It's very hard to overcome.

But I think that if I lose one, I can get one.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I believe that we lose some and we gain some.

We don't have to be afraid.

>>CORRECT

OR>>There's no reason for us to be scared.

If I have many failure, it is I have many experience.

>>If I have many failures, it means I have gained a lot of experience.

So failure is not bed.

>>So failure is not bad.

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