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What would people think of a man who backs down from a fight? Where do you hope to travel before you

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Well, wouldn't people hate man who backs down from a fight? HAHAHA!
Most people would think that a man who backs down from a fight is a loser or a coward.
He can back down from a fight to prevent a bigger fight, but people only see situations or actions, so I think if they don't know the postwar situation, he backs down because he lost to the other person.
People might also think of a man who backs down from a fight as coward who runs away without fighting like a macho.
Oh, there are so many places I want to travel before I die. But the place that comes to mind now is Bolivia.
Bolivia is one of the most famous places for the Uyuni salt desert, where everything is transparently reflected, and one of my bucket list is to visit there, so I want to go there before I die.
In addition, I want to go to places with ice caps, such as the Swiss Alps.

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Hello, Yun~
Thank you for answering 2 questions in 1 composition. I was surprised when I saw that you got two~ I am so sorry ^^v) But I greatly appreciate the effort ^_^
Chammy
Well, wouldn't people hate man who backs down from a fight? HAHAHA!
>> Well, wouldn't people hate men who back down from a fight? HAHAHA!
Most people would think that a man who backs down from a fight is a loser or a coward.
OR
>> When a man gives up a fight, most people assume he is a coward or a loser.
He can back down from a fight to prevent a bigger fight, but people only see situations or actions, so I think if they don't know the postwar situation, he backs down because he lost to the other person.
OR
>> Without fully understanding the circumstances, people tend to conclude that people give up simply because they lost to someone else. 
People might also think of a man who backs down from a fight as coward who runs away without fighting like a macho.
>> People might also think of a man who backs down from a fight as a coward who runs away without fighting like a macho.
Oh, there are so many places I want to travel before I die. But the place that comes to mind now is Bolivia.
OR
>> Although I can think of many destinations, Bolivia is the first that comes to me.
Bolivia is one of the most famous places for the Uyuni salt desert, where everything is transparently reflected, and one of my bucket list is to visit there, so I want to go there before I die.
>> I want to visit Bolivia before I die since it is one of the most well-known locations for the Uyuni salt desert, where everything is transparently mirrored.
In addition, I want to go to places with ice caps, such as the Swiss Alps.
>> I also wish to visit ice-capped spots like the Swiss Alps.
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