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When was the last time you felt proud of yourself?

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2024-10-25 121

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The last time I felt proud of myself was 1 week ago. I did a Flank posture, which is a type of muscle training. Now a day, I got injury of my right ankle. Actually I injured this last summer vation, maybe 3 month ago. But my ankle wasn't get better so I had to decide not to run or other aerobic exercises even though I am a kind of person who only like to do aerobic exercies better than muscle traninig. I can not help doing some muscle train because of my ankle injury. So I tried to do muscle training without using my ankles. The best exercise for me now is Flank. So I did it. For the first time, it was really hard to endure more than 10 minutes. I got "slipped disc" about a years ago, I couldn't do bend my back round. I have to do exercise in limited postures because of the back pain. Flank was good for me but it isn't easy to continue. It really bothered me to keep going every day. But I kept doing it every day step by step. Finally, a week ago I could do Flank for more than 2 minutes

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Emma! I know that feeling. Whenever I do planking, a minute feels like forever! That's a great achievement you had. Your hard work paid off. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
The last time I felt proud of myself was 1 week ago. 
>>Correct!
I did a Flank posture, which is a type of muscle training. 
>>I did a plank posture, which is a type of muscle training. 
Now a day, I got injury of my right ankle. 
>>Recently, I got my right ankle injured.
Actually I injured this last summer vation, maybe 3 month ago. 
>>Actually, it was last summer vacation around 3 months ago.
But my ankle wasn't get better so I had to decide not to run or other aerobic exercises even though I am a kind of person who only like to do aerobic exercies better than muscle traninig. 
>>But my ankle wasn't getting better so I had to decide not to run or do other aerobic exercises even though I am the kind of person who only likes to do aerobic exercises than muscle training. 
I can not help doing some muscle train because of my ankle injury. 
>>I can't do muscle training because of my ankle injury.
So I tried to do muscle training without using my ankles. 
>>Correct!
The best exercise for me now is Flank. 
>>The best exercise for me now is the plank.
So I did it. 
>>So, that's what I do.
For the first time, it was really hard to endure more than 10 minutes. 
>>The first time I tried, it was so hard to endure for more than 10 minutes.
I got "slipped disc" about a years ago, I couldn't do bend my back round. 
>>I also have a slipped disc years ago so I couldn't bend my back.
I have to do exercise in limited postures because of the back pain. 
>>I have to exercise in limited postures because of the back pain.
Flank was good for me but it isn't easy to continue. 
>>Plank was appropriate but it isn't easy to keep going.
It really bothered me to keep going every day.
>>It bothered me a lot to keep going every day.
 But I kept doing it every day step by step. 
>>Correct!
Finally, a week ago I could do Flank for more than 2 minutes.
>>Finally, a week ago, I held a plank for more than 2 minutes.

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