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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Do you and your friends lend money to each other? How much are you willing to lend or borrow?

-answer:
Basically I have a low expectation of human because I think as per situation can change always. I don't like borrow money to friend, but I intend to do lend.

If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn't receive it.

For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I hasn't wallet so in this case, I borrow money from my friend, I will transper money an account right there.

If I don't deposit money right there, I'll forget it, so I didn't believe it myself.

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Hello, Ms. Nala! There's nothing wrong with borrowing money but we should know the responsibility that comes with it. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Basically I have a low expectation of human because I think as per situation can change always. 
>>Basically, I have low expectations of people because I think the situation constantly changes.
I don't like borrow money to friend, but I intend to do lend.
>>I don't like borrowing money from my friends but I tend to lend money.
If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn't receive it.
>>If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn't receive it back.
For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I hasn't wallet so in this case, I borrow money from my friend, I will transper money an account right there.
>>For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I don't have my wallet, I would borrow money from my friend, but would transfer it to their accounts right there.
If I don't deposit money right there, I'll forget it, so I didn't believe it myself.
>>If I don't, I'll forget it, so I do not trust myself.

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