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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Disc

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In advantage, first, they can save money. This is because they don¡¯t have to spend money on unnecessary things. Such as baby¡¯s tools, like diapers and toys. So, they can spend money on self-development not for babies. Second, they can make families. It means we can get the greatest bond group in their life. It can be a energy in their life after finish their work. However, there are also disadvantages. First, they have to spend a lot of time to care for the babies. This is because when babies are in an infant phase parents have to spend their time for babies. So, they can¡¯t take time for themselves. Second, they feel stress. To explain, most parents feel stress when caring for babies. Also, according to the government, more than 70% of parents feel tired all day long when they care for babies. It causes their stress. So, if couples decide have a baby it has a more negative effect on their health.

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Hello, Mr. Hong Shik! Having babies is a huge decision to make as it is a lifetime commitment and responsibility. It surely has its ups and downs like any other life situation but I am sure that it gives a different level of happiness. But, in the end, it all comes down to what completes you and what makes you happy. Thank you for sharing!
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 In advantage, first, they can save money. 
>>The first advantage is that they can save money.
This is because they don¡¯t have to spend money on unnecessary things. 
>>Correct!
Such as baby¡¯s tools, like diapers and toys. 
>>Such are baby stuff, like diapers and toys.
So, they can spend money on self-development not for babies. 
>>So, they can spend money on personal development and not on babies. 
Second, they can make families. 
>>Correct!
It means we can get the greatest bond group in their life. 
>>It means we can get the greatest bond group of our life. 
It can be a energy in their life after finish their work. 
>>It can be a source of energy in their life after work.
However, there are also disadvantages. 
>>Correct!
First, they have to spend a lot of time to care for the babies. 
>>First, they have to consume a lot of time to care for the babies. 
This is because when babies are in an infant phase parents have to spend their time for babies. 
>>This is because, at this phase, parents have to spend their time with their babies. 
So, they can¡¯t take time for themselves. 
>>Correct!
Second, they feel stress. 
>>Second is the stress.
To explain, most parents feel stress when caring for babies. 
>>Most parents are under stress when taking care of their babies.
Also, according to the government, more than 70% of parents feel tired all day long when they care for babies. 
>>Also, according to the government, more than 70% of parents feel tired all day long due to child care.
It causes their stress. 
>>It causes them stress.
So, if couples decide have a baby it has a more negative effect on their health.
>>So, if couples decide to have babies, it takes a toll on their health.

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