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Hi teacher Divina.
Teacher, You said I need to listen to many pop song's, How should I listen to them?
Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
What are the things that are stressing you out these days? What can you do about them?
I'm stressed out abut the friends or persons relationship these days.
I get pressures that I will go to Canada How I can live well.
I think I will practice and try about it in Jeju.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework. You may listen to some English pop songs because it will help your listening skills.
I recommend listening to songs of Ed Sheeran or Coldplay. They're famous and it might initiate conversations when you're in Canada.
All in all, you can just listen to songs that suit your taste. :)

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I'm stressed out abut the friends or persons relationship these days.
>>I'm stressed out about my friends or my personal relationship these days.

2. I get pressures that I will go to Canada How I can live well.
>>I get pressure because I will be going to Canada and I'm thinking about how I can live well there.

3. I think I will practice and try about it in Jeju.
>>I think I will practice and try more while I'm still in Jeju.

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