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How would the world change if you could instantly understand any language?

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There are so many kinds of languages.
Language is very important to communicate with other culture.
If people could understand any language,
they will respect to others and have the cultural varieties.
Finally, the world will be much more developed in social relationship,

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Hi Young Soon!
I love how things are progressing.
I hope you will be consistent in your work.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are so many kinds of languages.
>> Correct
Language is very important to communicate with other culture.
>> Language is very important in order to communicate with people from other cultures.
If people could understand any language, they will respect to others and have the cultural varieties.
>> If people could understand any language, they would respect others from various cultures.
Finally, the world will be much more developed in social relationship,
>> Finally, the world will be much more developed in terms of social relationships. 
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