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Why do teachers need to give their students an exam?

작성자: 최*연
2024-10-22 302

회원님의 영작문

I think exam is essential in learning. Of course, even for me as a student, preparing for the exam is hard and annoying, and it is not easy to cover a lot of contents. So I don't like the exam. But without the exam, I know that I would study roughly. The purpose of the test is how much I know and understand what I learned.
However in fact, every student wants higher score than other's. Therefore we have to try to get good grades. I think that the completing process of these efforts is one of the most important elements in learning. It is because when we study and memorize the details, knowing the connection of small parts is a helpful factor to increase the completion of learning.
So teachers need to give their students an exam.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seo Yun~
Even though you are a student who finds it difficult to learn the material and that studying culture is difficult and competitive, you still believe that exams are important. It's great to know your opinion ^^
Chammy
I think exam is essential in learning. 
>> I think an exam is essential in learning.
Of course, even for me as a student, preparing for the exam is hard and annoying, and it is not easy to cover a lot of contents. 
>>Of course, even for me as a student, preparing for the exam is hard and annoying, and it is not easy to cover a lot of content. 
OR
>>It is difficult to cover a lot of material, and even for me as a student, exam preparation is challenging and frustrating.
So I don't like the exam. But without the exam, I know that I would study roughly.
OR
>> So, I dislike the test. However, I am aware that I would study roughly if there were no tests.
 The purpose of the test is how much I know and understand what I learned.
>> The purpose of the test is to assess my knowledge and comprehension of what I learned.
However in fact, every student wants higher score than other's. Therefore we have to try to get good grades.
>> However, every student wants a higher score than others. Therefore we strive to get good grades.
 I think that the completing process of these efforts is one of the most important elements in learning.
>> I think that the process of these efforts is one of the most important elements in learning. 
 It is because when we study and memorize the details, knowing the connection of small parts is a helpful factor to increase the completion of learning.
>>  It is because when we study and memorize the details, knowing the connection of small parts is a helpful factor in increasing the completion of learning.
So teachers need to give their students an exam.
>> Correct
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