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What might happen if you don¡¯t use any phones in a day, week, month, or year?

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I think I will be anxious at first. Because it's very inconvenient if I suddenly couldn't use my phone. Especially, I start my daily routine with the 'to do mate' application on my phone. I'm a person who has a habit of recording(or I'm a planner), and there are many to do lists in several categories, including today's to do, schedule, study, and self-development, act. When I sucessed, I check the check box and also records what I did at all of time on Google Calendar. And there are so many things I do with my phone, such as map apps, calendars, alarms, e-book apps, study, and music that are indispensable. However, a day or a week would be fine. If I don't have to contact someone and don't have a team project to do, I can feel fine without a phone. What I do with my phone can replace it with another analog things. Therefore if there's no contact problem, it won't be bad without a phone. Sometimes I want to be free with phone and take a rest peacefully.

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Hi, Lin! It sounds like you have a well-structured routine that relies heavily on your phone! It¡¯s totally normal to feel anxious about being without it, especially since you use it for so many essential tasks. But it¡¯s great to hear that you¡¯re open to the idea of going phone-free for a day or a week. Embracing analog alternatives can be refreshing and might help you find some peace. Remember, taking a break from your phone can also lead to new insights and experiences!
~T. Jenna

I think I will be anxious at first. Because it's very inconvenient if I suddenly couldn't use my phone. 
>>I think I would be anxious at first because it would be very inconvenient if I suddenly couldn't use my phone.
OR
>>I¡¯d probably feel on edge at first since being suddenly cut off from my phone would throw a wrench in things.
Especially, I start my daily routine with the 'to do mate' application on my phone. 
Correct, or
>>I kick off my day with the 'To Do Mate' app on my phone, which helps me organize my routine.
I'm a person who has a habit of recording(or I'm a planner), and there are many to do lists in several categories, including today's to do, schedule, study, and self-development, etc. 
Correct, or
>>I'm someone who enjoys planning and keeping records, with various to-do lists organized into categories like today's tasks, schedule, study, self-development, and more.
When I sucessed, I check the check box and also records what I did at all of time on Google Calendar. 
>>When I succeed, I check the box and also record everything I did on Google Calendar.
And there are so many things I do with my phone, such as map apps, calendars, alarms, e-book apps, study, and music that are indispensable. 
>>And, there are many essential things I do with my phone, such as using map apps, calendars, alarms, e-book apps, studying, and listening to music.
However, a day or a week would be fine.
>> However, going without a phone for a day or even a week would be fine.
OR
>>However, I could easily weather the storm of going without my phone for a day or even a week.
 If I don't have to contact someone and don't have a team project to do, I can feel fine without a phone. 
>> If I don't have to contact someone or have a team project to do, I can feel fine without a phone.
OR
>>If I don't need to reach out to anyone or work on a team project, I can comfortably go without my phone.
What I do with my phone can replace it with another analog things. 
>>What I usually do with my phone can be replaced with other analog alternatives.
OR
>>The activities I typically engage in on my phone can effortlessly be substituted with a range of analog alternatives.
Therefore if there's no contact problem, it won't be bad without a phone. 
>>Therefore, if there's no issue with staying in contact, it wouldn't be too bad to go without a phone.
OR
>>Therefore, as long as staying in touch isn¡¯t a concern, I could easily go off the grid without a phone.
Sometimes I want to be free with phone and take a rest peacefully.
>>Sometimes I just want to be free from my phone and rest peacefully.
OR
>>Sometimes I just want to unplug and enjoy some peace and quiet away from my phone.
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