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What strategies do you use to build your self-confidence?

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2024-10-21 1330

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It seems like l don't have self-confidence. Sometimes I envy people who have self-confidence. People of low confidence have to find way to improve. The way is loving oneself. Think for yourself I am a good people, l can do it, and I can do it well. Next you have to prepare well before start it. If you will prepare well, you could do it well. If you are perfect you could have self-confidence.

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Hi Eva,

Thank you for doing your homework. It¡¯s completely normal to feel a lack of confidence at times, and it¡¯s great that you understand how self-love and preparation play a role in building it. Being well-prepared can definitely boost your confidence, but remember that no one is perfect. It¡¯s important to love yourself for who you are, even when things aren¡¯t perfect. Everyone's journey is unique, so be kind to yourself as you keep growing. I¡¯m here to support you along the way!

~Teacher Cathy

 

It seems like l don't have self-confidence.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It feels like I lack self-confidence.

Sometimes I envy people who have self-confidence.

>>CORRECT

OR>>At times, I feel envious of those who possess self-confidence.

People of low confidence have to find way to improve.

>>People who have low confidence have to find a way to improve.

The way is loving oneself.

>>CORRECT

OR>>The path is through self-love.

Think for yourself I am a good people, l can do it, and I can do it well.

>>Think for yourself: I am a good person, I can do it, and I can do it well.

Next you have to prepare well before start it.

>>Next, you have to prepare well before doing anything.

If you will prepare well, you could do it well.

>>If you prepare well, you can do it well.

If you are perfect you could have self-confidence.

>>CORRECT

OR>>If you're perfect, you'll have self-confidence.

 

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