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I think it will be so happy because we can talk at there one country languages.

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Hi Sunny!
Take a look at the revised patterns.
This will afford some clarity.
I just streamlined your ideas.
Practice this more.^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think it will be so happy because we can talk at there one country languages.
>> I think it will make us so happy because we can speak with people from other countries using the same language. 
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