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Why do you think many people smoke?

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I think to smoke of a habit or stress.

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Hi, James! Thank you for this answer. It was short and straightforward. Please feel free to share ideas any time. Smoking doesn't do anything good for our health. Let's hope smokers could find a better habit or way to relieve stress. See you soon!
--Teacher Anji

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