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Why do you think apologizing is important in relationships?

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I think an apology is an admission of a mistake. Admitting a mistake and not repeating it is the core of interpersonal relationships.

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Anna!
You're absolutely right! Apologies, when sincere, not only show accountability but also strengthen trust and communication in relationships. The real value lies in learning from mistakes and making a conscious effort to avoid them in the future. It¡¯s key to building lasting connections.
~Kelly
I think an apology is an admission of a mistake. 
>> Correct
OR:
>> I believe that offering an apology acknowledges a mistake. 
Admitting a mistake and not repeating it is the core of interpersonal relationships.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Recognizing errors and ensuring they are not repeated forms the foundation of healthy interpersonal relationships.
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