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English is very important to me!

작성자: 최*연
2024-10-18 470

회원님의 영작문

English is a very important language in my life at the moment. There are many reasons why I have to do it well.

First, all the contents of college classes are written in English. Ppt, class textbooks, thesis etc. So I must be able to read and interpret English.
Second, I want to get a job at a foreign company in Korea. So, I need a good score at OPIC. And I heard that an employee at the abroad is having an English interview.
The third is how I started phone call English, and I went to Canada university for training this summer. Most of the students speak fluently in English, but I was so ashamed of my English skills. I could simply read, speak, and interpret, but I could feel that it was difficult to express my presentation or have a daily conversation. If the language is free, I think I can get mind truly to communicating with other foreign people.
Last! I am working in administration office. Sometimes, foreign student come here and ask something to need a help. I want to help them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seo Yeon!~
I once thought, "What if we only speak one language?" I had the same thoughts as you, which is that we could communicate more easily and that we could express ourselves without fear.
Chammy
English is a very important language in my life at the moment. There are many reasons why I have to do it well.
>>Correct
First, all the contents of college classes are written in English. PPT, class textbooks, thesis etc. So I must be able to read and interpret English.
Or
>>First, all college course materials are written in English. PowerPoint, course materials, theses, etc. I therefore must be able to read and understand English.
Second, I want to get a job at a foreign company in Korea. So, I need a good score at OPIC. And I heard that an employee at the abroad is having an English interview.
OR
>>Second, I would like to work for a foreign company in Korea. So I need a good OPIC score. Additionally, I've heard that an English-speaking interview is being conducted for an overseas employee.
The third is how I started phone call English, and I went to Canada university for training this summer. 
>> The third is how I started phone call English, and I will go to University in Canada for training this summer. 
Most of the students speak fluently in English, but I was so ashamed of my English skills. 
>>Most of the students speak English fluently, but I am so ashamed of my English skills. 
I could simply read, speak, and interpret, but I could feel that it was difficult to express my presentation or have a daily conversation. 
>>Correct
If the language is free, I think I can get mind truly to communicating with other foreign people.
>>If the language is free, I think I can get my mind truly to communicate with other foreign people.
OR
>>If the language is free, I believe I will be able to fully communicate with other nationalities
Last! I am working in administration office. Sometimes, foreign student come here and ask something to need a help. I want to help them.
>> Lastly,  I am working in the administration office. Sometimes, foreign students come here and ask something to need help. I wish to help them.
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