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Does an age difference make it difficult to be friends?

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I believe an age difference is not difficult to make friends with. This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their character not their age. I can attest to my opinion through my experience. When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who is 30 years old man. I went to the bar and fortunately I met him. He asked me what is my major and what I want to be future. He gave me pretty much good advice and I could bark in my mind. Honestly, his advice had affected me until now. It shows me that difference is not difficult to make friends with.

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Hello, Mr. Hong Shik! It might also be a personal preference. For some people and cultures, it is unusual or may seem awkward to have a friendly relationship with people who are not your age. However, I have observed that people are becoming more open-minded to the idea.
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I believe an age difference is not difficult to make friends with. 
>>I believe that an age difference does not make it difficult to make friends. 
This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their character not their age. 
>>This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their characters, not their age. 
I can attest to my opinion through my experience. 
>>Correct!
When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who is 30 years old man. 
>>When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who was a 30-year-old man. 
I went to the bar and fortunately I met him. 
>>I went to a bar and fortunately, I met him there. 
He asked me what is my major and what I want to be future. 
>>He asked me what my major was and what I wanted to be in the future. 
He gave me pretty much good advice and I could bark in my mind. 
>>He gave me pretty good advice and I could bark in my mind. 
Honestly, his advice had affected me until now. 
>>Honestly, his advice has affected me until now. 
It shows me that difference is not difficult to make friends with.
>>It showed me that age difference does not make it difficult to make friends.

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