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Does an age difference make it difficult to be friends?

작성자: 박*식
2024-10-17 1426

회원님의 영작문

I believe an age difference is not difficult to make friends with. This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their character not their age. I can attest to my opinion through my experience. When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who is 30 years old man. I went to the bar and fortunately I met him. He asked me what is my major and what I want to be future. He gave me pretty much good advice and I could bark in my mind. Honestly, his advice had affected me until now. It shows me that difference is not difficult to make friends with.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Mr. Hong Shik! It might also be a personal preference. For some people and cultures, it is unusual or may seem awkward to have a friendly relationship with people who are not your age. However, I have observed that people are becoming more open-minded to the idea.
-T. Sonny
I believe an age difference is not difficult to make friends with. 
>>I believe that an age difference does not make it difficult to make friends. 
This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their character not their age. 
>>This is because when we make friends, we usually think about their characters, not their age. 
I can attest to my opinion through my experience. 
>>Correct!
When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who is 30 years old man. 
>>When I was a first-grade university student, I made a friend who was a 30-year-old man. 
I went to the bar and fortunately I met him. 
>>I went to a bar and fortunately, I met him there. 
He asked me what is my major and what I want to be future. 
>>He asked me what my major was and what I wanted to be in the future. 
He gave me pretty much good advice and I could bark in my mind. 
>>He gave me pretty good advice and I could bark in my mind. 
Honestly, his advice had affected me until now. 
>>Honestly, his advice has affected me until now. 
It shows me that difference is not difficult to make friends with.
>>It showed me that age difference does not make it difficult to make friends.

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