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1. Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?
A) I remember I have had a few experiences a long time ago.
But I can't remember what really happened.
Maybe it wasn't important.
However, in my opinion, I think that the dream that I really want to achieve was achieved by appearing in a dream,
and in the future, it actually appeared as a result like a dream.
I don't think the story of Joseph in the Bible appears in reality anymore.

2. Have you ever felt that you knew some people the first time you met them?
A) There are many times.
But there seem to be many reasons to feel that way.
There are cases that the face looks normal and looks like I've seen it somewhere.
Or sometimes I actually saw it but I can't remember it.
And like the story in the drama, it's actually someone, but there may be cases that the person has amnesia.
It's a heartbreaking story, of course.

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Hi, David.

Thank you for answering this homework. Your insights are really good. It shows so much character. I am glad to be your English tutor. Continue to practice constructing your sentences better.

Regards,
Teacher Dana




A) I remember I have had a few experiences a long time ago.

>>>I remember having a few such experiences a long time ago.


But I can't remember what really happened.

>>>CORRECT


Maybe it wasn't important.

>>>CORRECT


However, in my opinion, I think that the dream that I really want to achieve was achieved by appearing in a dream, and in the future, it actually appeared as a result like a dream.

>>>In my opinion, the dream I truly wanted to achieve first appeared in a dream, and later it became a reality, just as I had dreamed.


I don't think the story of Joseph in the Bible appears in reality anymore.

>>>I don't think stories like Joseph's from the Bible happen in real life anymore.


A) There are many times.

>>>This has happened to me many times.


But there seem to be many reasons to feel that way.

>>>CORRECT


There are cases that the face looks normal and looks like I've seen it somewhere.

>>>Sometimes, a person's face seems familiar, as if I've seen it somewhere before.


Or sometimes I actually saw it but I can't remember it.

>>>Or perhaps I've seen them before but can't remember where.


And like the story in the drama, it's actually someone, but there may be cases that the person has amnesia.

>>>Like in a drama, it could actually be someone I know, but they might have amnesia.


It's a heartbreaking story, of course.

>>>CORRECT

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