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Learning is always worthwhile.

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I believe that learning is always worthwhile.
Learning makes people feel accomplishment and the feeling of accomplishment makes people have more self-confidence and thoughtful.
Thus, it would make our lives more lively and active.
Even if we feels like learning about something is no useful now, it would compensate in some way somedays.

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Hi, Ms. Anna! I love your thoughts on learning! It really does bring a sense of accomplishment and boosts our confidence. Even if something doesn¡¯t seem useful right now, it often pays off down the road. Keep up the great attitude towards learning!
~T. Jenna

I believe that learning is always worthwhile.
Correct, or
>>I believe that learning is always a good investment.
Learning makes people feel accomplishment and the feeling of accomplishment makes people have more self-confidence and thoughtful.
>>Learning makes people feel a sense of accomplishment, and that feeling makes them have more self-confidence and thoughtfulness.
OR
>> Learning makes people feel a sense of accomplishment, and that feeling boosts their self-confidence and thoughtfulness.
Thus, it would make our lives more lively and active.
Correct, or
>>Thus, it brings more vibrancy and activity to our lives.
Even if we feels like learning about something is no useful now, it would compensate in some way somedays.
>>Even if we feel that learning about something is not useful right now, it may pay off in some way someday.


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