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My daughters' deadlines set by me are mostly related to our academy management. Making out quarterly schedules, deciding texts or materials to teach, posting ads on Naver, and so on. I rarely give them personal deadlines even for getting married. But for my eldest daughter, I used to give some pressure on her relating to being independent of us.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I see! It's good that you only try to set deadlines when it comes to work and try not to interfere too much in their decisions in life. Thank you as well for sharing in class why you put pressure on your eldest daughter to become independent.
- T. Caitlyn
My daughters' deadlines set by me are mostly related to our academy management. Making out quarterly schedules, deciding texts or materials to teach, posting ads on Naver, and so on. 
>> My daughters' deadlines set by me are mostly related to our academy management, including making out quarterly schedules, deciding on texts or materials to teach, posting ads on Naver, and so on.
I rarely give them personal deadlines even for getting married. 
>> CORRECT
But for my eldest daughter, I used to give some pressure on her relating to being independent of us.
>> But for my eldest daughter, I used to put some pressure on her regarding becoming independent from us.
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