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Have you ever dreamt about something that later came true?

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2024-10-15 472

회원님의 영작문

Yes, I have one. I dremt about entering to the popular university. There are some universities that famous and high level in Korea. I was wondering about campus life and I wanted to be a proud daughter to my parents. However, I failed to the test and interview when I was 19 years old. Inevitably, I entered a university that I had never thought about. Therefore I couldn't enjoy a campus life and felt depressed. In order to give up regret, I studied for the test while I studied my major in the university at the same time in my second year of university. Fortunately I was able to enter the university that I wanted a year later. I think I was lucky.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Lin! Thank you for sharing your experience! It’s inspiring to see how you turned a setback into an opportunity. Your determination to study hard and pursue your dreams is commendable. I’m glad you achieved your goal of entering the university you wanted.
~T. Jenna

Yes, I have one. I dremt about entering to the popular university. 
>>Yes, I have one. I dreamt about entering the popular university.
OR
>>Yes, I have one. I envisioned myself gaining admission to a prestigious university.
There are some universities that famous and high level in Korea. 
>>There are some universities that are famous and of a high level in Korea.
OR
>>Several universities in Korea are renowned and esteemed for their high academic standards.
I was wondering about campus life and I wanted to be a proud daughter to my parents. 
>>I was wondering about campus life and wanted to make my parents proud.
However, I failed to the test and interview when I was 19 years old. 
>>However, I failed the test and the interview when I was 19 years old.
OR
>>However, I flunked the test and the interview when I was 19.
Inevitably, I entered a university that I had never thought about. 
Correct, or
>>Inevitably, I enrolled in a university that I had never considered.
Therefore, I couldn't enjoy a campus life and felt depressed. 
Correct, or
>>As a result, I couldn't make the most of campus life and ended up feeling down.
In order to give up regret, I studied for the test while I studied my major in the university at the same time in my second year of university. 
>>To overcome my regrets, I studied for the test while studying / pursuing my major in my second year at university.
Fortunately I was able to enter the university that I wanted a year later. 
Correct, or
>>Fortunately, I gained admission to my desired university a year later.
I think I was lucky.
Correct, or
>>I consider myself fortunate.
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