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I think ¡®TAEPYEONGSOGUKBAP¡¯ is best restaurant in Korea.
Because, They have very very delicious menu of Korean Food.
The restaurant is been in Deajeon.
Deajeon is my hometown. (I¡¯m live in Seoul now)
So, I had meal in there when I visited Deajeon every moments.
Best menu is ¡®so-gukbap¡¯ that boil cow bone in soup.
Put rice into soup and eat it.
I really really like it.
I recommend you this restaurant!

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Wow! I suddenly feel like trying it for breakfast now, Daeun! You gave a wonderful description of its taste.-Faith-
I think ¡®TAEPYEONGSOGUKBAP¡¯ is best restaurant in Korea. Because, They have very very delicious menu of Korean Food.
>> I think Taepyeongso Gukbap is the best restaurant in Korea because they offer a very delicious menu of Korean Food.
The restaurant is been in Deajeon.
>> The restaurant is located in Deajeon.
Deajeon is my hometown. (I¡¯m live in Seoul now)
>> Daejeon is my hometown, but I¡¯m living in Seoul now.
So, I had meal in there when I visited Deajeon every moments.
>> Therefore, I always had a meal there when I visited Daejeon.
Best menu is ¡®so-gukbap¡¯ that boil cow bone in soup.
>> Their best dish is 'so-gukbap,' which is made by boiling cow bones in soup.
Put rice into soup and eat it.
>> We put rice into the soup and eat it.
I really really like it.
>> I really, really like it.
OR I absolutely love it.
I recommend you this restaurant!
>> I recommend you try this restaurant!
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