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Q: What could happen if there are too many holidays?
A: I think if there's more holidays, people might work more everyday.
Since they don't really have enough time in an year if they have so many holidays, they'll need to work more on the days they work.
Also for students, they might have less vacation.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think if there's more holidays, people might work more everyday.
>>I think if there are more holidays, people might have to work more every day.

2. Since they don't really have enough time in an year if they have so many holidays, they'll need to work more on the days they work.
>>Since they don't really have enough time in a year because of the holidays, they'll need to work more on their working days.

3. Also for students, they might have less vacation.
>>As for students, they might have lesser vacation time.

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