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What do you like about your 1st grade teacher?

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My 1st grade teacher is very kind, understand me well and teach me to study well, so I like 1st grade teacher but my favorite teacher is 4th grade teacher.

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Hi Cha Yu Jin!

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What do you like about your 1st grade teacher?

My 1st grade teacher is very kind, understand me well and teach me to study well, so I like 1st grade teacher but my favorite teacher is 4th grade teacher.
>> My 1st grade teacher was very kind. She was understanding and teaches me to study well, so I like my 1st grade teacher but my most favorite teacher is my 4th grade teacher.
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