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Abandoned stuff

작성자: 박*경
2024-10-09 562

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There are various things which I have to throw away in my house. But, I always procrastinate throwing them away because it is a nuisance. And everytime I try cleaning up my room, I think that 'this stuff will be helpful someday' and I give up abandon it. This is the main reason why I have a variety of useless things.
Clothes are the first stuff. I like try many types of fashion, so there are a large number of clothes in my closet. But it is really problomatic that I frequently change my mind and my taste. my fashion taste in the past is definetly different from current taste. However I think that 'what a waste! I can't throw away these. These clothes look like brandnew ones.' ... Maybe I have to donate these clothes to children in orphanage or throw away outmoded ones.
And books are another stuff. I couldn't abandon these books in a definitely same reason. Well, solution to this case is exactly same. Donating may be better than throwing away except for severly outdated ones.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Casey! I honestly have the same concerns. I guess, I was actually not alone. We have to declutter soon whether donating them or throwing them away, we must start gradually. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
There are various things which I have to throw away in my house. 
>>Correct!
But, I always procrastinate throwing them away because it is a nuisance. 
>>Correct!
And everytime I try cleaning up my room, I think that 'this stuff will be helpful someday' and I give up abandon it. 
>>And every time I try cleaning up my room, I think that 'this stuff will be helpful someday' and I give up abandoning it. 
This is the main reason why I have a variety of useless things.
>>Correct!
Clothes are the first stuff. 
>>Correct!
I like try many types of fashion, so there are a large number of clothes in my closet. 
>>I like trying various fashion styles, so there is a large number of clothes in my closet. 
But it is really problomatic that I frequently change my mind and my taste. 
>>But it is so problematic that I frequently change my mind and my taste. 
my fashion taste in the past is definetly different from current taste. 
>>My fashion taste in the past is definitely different from my current taste. 
However I think that 'what a waste! I can't throw away these. 
>>However, I always think: 'what a waste! I can't throw these away. 
These clothes look like brandnew ones.' ... 
>>These clothes look like the brand new ones.
Maybe I have to donate these clothes to children in orphanage or throw away outmoded ones.
>>Maybe, I have to donate these clothes to children in orphanages or throw away the out of fashion ones.
And books are another stuff. 
>>Books are another cause of concern.
I couldn't abandon these books in a definitely same reason. 
>>I couldn't abandon these books for the same, exact reason. 
Well, solution to this case is exactly same. 
>>Well, the solution to this case is exactly the same. 
Donating may be better than throwing away except for severly outdated ones.
>>Donating may be better than throwing away except for the severely outdated ones.
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