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What are some examples of impolite behavior that you have noticed?

>>> Although I have not noticed many impolite behaviors around me, there is an example that I think it is not polite. That is the act of not listening. Telling itself is a important acting because telling is a main tool when we communicate. We share many informations and much emotion through it. Maybe, It is the most important thing along our lives. If you agree the previous sentence, you may agree that listening is also important. But if you don't focus on other's words, you can't get along with others in the world. Careful listening is a way of showing respect.

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

What are some examples of impolite behavior that you have noticed?

>>> Although I have not noticed many impolite behaviors around me, there is an example that I think it is not polite.
>> CORRECT!
 That is the act of not listening. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >>  That is the act of not being a good-listener. 
Telling itself is a important acting because telling is a main tool when we communicate. 
>> Speaking itself is an important act because speaking is the main tool when we communicate. 
We share many informations and much emotion through it.
>> We share many information and much emotions through it.
Maybe, it is the most important thing along our lives. 
>> Maybe, it is the most important thing in our lives. 
If you agree the previous sentence, you may agree that listening is also important. 
>> CORRECT!
But if you don't focus on other's words, you can't get along with others in the world. 
>> CORRECT!
Careful listening is a way of showing respect.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Listening carefully is a way of showing respect.

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