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Should more people use public transport instead of cars or should more people get their own cars?

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I think more people should use public transport instead of cars. Majority of Koreans have their own cars so sometimes it's more fast to use transport than car. Also To use car can makes environment worse. I feel environment gets worse so fast so we need to reduce carbon. Therefore, I guess more people should use public transport.

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Thank you for highlighting your points despite being sick today, Betty!
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I think more people should use public transport instead of cars.
Or
>>Public transportation is a better option than driving a car, in my opinion.
 Majority of Koreans have their own cars so sometimes it's more fast to use transport than car. 
>>  Majority of Koreans have their own cars so sometimes it's faster to use public transport than a car. 
Also To use car can makes environment worse. 
>> Also, using a car can make the environment worse. 
I feel environment gets worse so fast so we need to reduce carbon. Therefore, I guess more people should use public transport.
OR
>> I think we need to cut emissions since the climate is becoming worse so quickly. I suppose more people should to take public transportation as a result.
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