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In your opinion, what does \"every end is a new beginning\" mean?

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2024-10-07 498

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I agree with the saying above because something new always come in after the other ends in my life. For example, my long period of 6 years of elementary school that seemed not to end was followed by secondary school. And the similar repetitions came to pass again and again. Even the death which is considered the final end is believed to be the new beginning of life in whether the heaven or hell, which is a posthumous life. In this way, I believe every thing goes around and around. Like many people, I also enjoy the new beginning all the time. New beginning fills my heart with hope and confidence that I can do better this time than the previous one. In some sense, this new hope to restart is a kind of blessings that God gives the humanity who can't be perfect although they always pursue perfection, only to fail or resort to half-success.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Steve!

The phrase, credited to Seneca, speaks to the limitless possibilities of life.
In general, it is understood to suggest that when something comes to an end, it opens up new possibilities, therefore the end of one thing may signal the start of something else.

Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework.

I will see you later in class.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I agree with the saying above because something new always come in after the other ends in my life.
>>> I agree with the saying above because something new always comes in after the other ends in my life.
>>> OR: I agree with the saying above since something new constantly appears after something else ends in my life.
For example, my long period of 6 years of elementary school that seemed not to end was followed by secondary school. And the similar repetitions came to pass again and again.
>>> For example, my long period of 6 years of elementary school that seemed not to end was followed by secondary school. And the similar repetitions came to pass again and again.
>>> OR: For example, after a seemingly endless six years of elementary school, I moved on to secondary school. And identical repetitions occurred repeatedly.
Even the death which is considered the final end is believed to be the new beginning of life in whether the heaven or hell, which is a posthumous life. In this way, I believe every thing goes around and around.
>>> Even death, which is considered the final end, is believed to be the new beginning of life, whether in heaven or hell, which is a posthumous life. In this way, I believe everything goes round and round.
Like many people, I also enjoy the new beginning all the time. New beginning fills my heart with hope and confidence that I can do better this time than the previous one.
>>> Like many people, I also enjoy the new beginning all the time. A new beginning fills my heart with hope and confidence that I can do better this time than the previous one.
>>> OR: I, like many others, always look forward to a new beginning. The prospect of a new beginning inspires me to strive for greater success than before.
In some sense, this new hope to restart is a kind of blessings that God gives the humanity who can't be perfect although they always pursue perfection, only to fail or resort to half-success.
>>> In some sense, this new hope to restart is a kind of blessing that God gives humanity who can't be perfect, although they always pursue perfection, only to fail or resort to half-success.
>>> OR: In some respects, this new optimism for a fresh start is a boon from God for humanity, which cannot be flawless, despite their constant pursuit of perfection, only to fail or settle for half-success.
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