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How did you stay in touch with friends and family before using social media?

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Long time ago, when I was young, we didn't have smart phone, computer and internet. When I need to touch someone, I made a phone call or I wrote a letter. Sometimes I had meeting with my friend, but something happened for me, so I called to my friend, But my friend went out aleady, l had no way contact with her. It is often to happened. We had a long wait, we didn't know what happened. Our life patten was slow, but we didn't know that. Now I think about that, l was very miss analog days.

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Hello Eva,

I found your perspective on communicating through phone calls and letters very interesting. I can relate to your feelings about the slower pace of life back then, it often allowed for deeper connections, even if it meant waiting for a response. There¡¯s a certain charm and simplicity of those days that we sometimes overlook in our fast-paced digital world. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more of your thoughts in the future!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Long time ago, when I was young, we didn't have smart phone, computer and internet.

 >>A long time ago, when I was young, we didn't have smartphones, computers, or the internet.

When I need to touch someone, I made a phone call or I wrote a letter.

>>When I needed to be in touch with someone, I made a phone call or wrote a letter.

Sometimes I had meeting with my friend, but something happened for me, so I called to my friend, But my friend went out aleady, l had no way contact with her.

>>I was supposed to meet my friend, but something came up. I called her, but she had already left, and I had no way to contact her.

It is often to happened.

>>It happens quite often.

We had a long wait, we didn't know what happened.

>>CORRECT

OR>>We waited for a long time and we didn't know what happened.

Our life patten was slow, but we didn't know that.

>>Our life pattern was slow, but we didn't know that.

Now I think about that, l was very miss analog days.

>>Now that I think about it, I really miss the analog days.

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