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Describe your favorite season and explain why it appeals to you the most.

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My favorite season is spring.
In the spring, I can feel a liveness.
The winter in Korea is too long and too cold. and the temperature is minus degree.
After the winter, temperature increase almost fifteen to twenty degree. so flower grow and everything get a new life.
That's why I like spring.

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Hi! I¡¯m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
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My favorite season is spring.
>> Correct
OR >> Spring is the season I love the most.

In the spring, I can feel a liveness.
>>  During spring, I can feel a sense of liveliness. 

The winter in Korea is too long and too cold. and the temperature is minus degree.
>> Winters in Korea are too long and extremely cold, with temperatures often below freezing. 

After the winter, temperature increase almost fifteen to twenty degree. so flower grow and everything get a new life.
>> After winter, the temperature rises by about fifteen to twenty degrees, allowing flowers to bloom and everything to come back to life. 

That's why I like spring.
>> Correct
OR >>  That's why I love spring.
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