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My major

작성자: 박*경
2024-10-02 592

회원님의 영작문

When I was 19 years old, I had to choose my major. At that time, my favorite major was design so I applied for design department. Because my dream was to become an illustrator, so I didn't want to apply for another department. But I failed to enter that department, so I decided to apply for craft department. It is relatively easy to major craft or ceramic art because getting qualifications for these departments is more straightforward. So, to be honest, this is the main reason why I choose my major. So when I entered the university initially, I didn't like my major and wanted to give up school willingly. But thesedays I have adapt to this environment and felt interest in my major.
Actually, prospect of my major, ceramic, isn't very bright. It is really difficult to be a artist or get a job. Sometimes I regret entering this department, but I believe I can get a job someday. Well, Maybe It depends on my portfolio.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Casey! Honestly, the first time you told me about your major, I initially thought of it as an elegant form of art. Thank you so much for telling me this story about how you ended up with your major. I believe that everything has a reason and if something is meant for you, then it happens. But, I also believe in your confidence and your goals! It's all in your hands, too. 
-T. Sonny
When I was 19 years old, I had to choose my major. 
>>Correct!
At that time, my favorite major was design so I applied for design department. 
>>At that time, my favorite major was design so I applied to the design department. 
Because my dream was to become an illustrator, so I didn't want to apply for another department. 
>>Because my dream was to become an illustrator, I didn't want to apply to another department. 
But I failed to enter that department, so I decided to apply for craft department. 
>>However, I failed to enter that department, so I decided to apply to the craft department. 
It is relatively easy to major craft or ceramic art because getting qualifications for these departments is more straightforward. 
>>It is relatively easy to major in craft or ceramic art because the qualifications for these departments are more straightforward. 
So, to be honest, this is the main reason why I choose my major. 
>>And honestly, this is the main reason why I chose my major. 
So when I entered the university initially, I didn't like my major and wanted to give up school willingly. 
>>However, at first, I didn't like my major and wanted to give up school without hesitation. 
But thesedays I have adapt to this environment and felt interest in my major.
>>But these days I have adapted to this environment and felt interested in my major.
Actually, prospect of my major, ceramic, isn't very bright. It is really difficult to be a artist or get a job. 
>>Actually, the prospect of my major, ceramic, isn't very clear. 
It is really difficult to be a artist or get a job. 
>>It is a struggle to be an artist or get a job. 
Sometimes I regret entering this department, but I believe I can get a job someday. 
>>There are times when I regret entering this department, but I believe that I will get a job in the future. 
Well, Maybe It depends on my portfolio.
>>Well, it will depend on my portfolio.
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