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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Are you an introvert or an extrovert? Or somewhere in the middle?

Answer: Maybe I am introvert. Sometime I tring to be an extovert when I meet a person for first or formal setting that is very difficult and spent a lot of energy for me. So I must have to time my energy charging.  I like have some alone time.

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Hello, Ms. Nala! I can relate to you. There are times when interacting with people gets very draining and our social batteries run out. That's why, it's important to have time to relax and recharge.
-T. Sonny
Maybe I am introvert. 
>>Maybe, I am an introvert.
Sometime I tring to be an extovert when I meet a person for first or formal setting that is very difficult and spent a lot of energy for me.
>>Sometimes, I try to be an extrovert when I meet someone for the first time or in a formal setting which is very difficult and I tend to spend a lot of my energy.
So I must have to time my energy charging.
>>So, I must have some time to recharge.
I like have some alone time.
>>I like having some alone time.
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