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Should holidays be spread evenly throughout the year, or is it better to have clusters of holidays d

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I think It's better clusters of holidays during specific months

Every worker in Korea waits to hollyday. Holidays are the only refuge for workers. So, If they spend a time on month have a much holidays during specific months, They feel so happy and can wait other specific months.
Because they know how sweet a long holiday is to them, even if they know there will be few holidays next month.

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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
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I think It's better clusters of holidays during specific months
>>CORRECT
OR >>  Even if they know there will be fewer holidays the following month, they understand how refreshing a long holiday can be.

Every worker in Korea waits to hollyday. 
>> Every worker in Korea looks forward to holidays.

Holidays are the only refuge for workers. 
>>Holidays are the only true respite for workers.

So, If they spend a time on month have a much holidays during specific months, They feel so happy and can wait other specific months.
>>  If they can enjoy a month with many holidays, they feel happy and can look forward to the other months with more holidays. 

Because they know how sweet a long holiday is to them, even if they know there will be few holidays next month.
>>  Even if they know there will be fewer holidays the following month, they understand how refreshing a long holiday can be.
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