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Do you believe cosmetics companies\' ads that say their products erase wrinkles and slow down the ag

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I think I'll be half confident.
Originally, advertisements are exaggerated and furthermore, there are quite a few false ones.
Of course, Korea strictly regulates such things and attaches data such as reliable experimental results, but there are often exaggerated or false ads.
But I think people who are in that situation will believe it.
People who think wrinkles are a complex or order can be trusted becasue they want to remove them and slow the aging process, but others may not be interested in wrinkles or aging.

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Hello, Yun!
I appreciate you expressing your thoughts. I believe that advancements in medical technology are also making the aforementioned treatments possible. If I may, I think that having surgery is more important than relying solely on over-the-counter creams that promise to work.
Chammy

I think I'll be half confident.
or
>>I believe I'll be somewhat certain.
Originally, advertisements are exaggerated and furthermore, there are quite a few false ones.
>> Originally, advertisements are exaggerated and there are quite a few false ones.
Of course, Korea strictly regulates such things and attaches data such as reliable experimental results, but there are often exaggerated or false ads.
OR
>>Of course, Korea keeps a close eye on these things and demands accuracy, including reliable experiment results, but false or exaggerated advertising are common.
But I think people who are in that situation will believe it.
OR
>>However, I believe that those people n the situation will be deceived.
People who think wrinkles are a complex or order can be trusted becasue they want to remove them and slow the aging process, but others may not be interested in wrinkles or aging.
>> People believe that wrinkles can be concealed because they want to remove them and slow the aging process, but others may not be interested in anti-wrinkles or aging procedures.
OR
>>While some people wish to minimize wrinkles and slow down the aging process, others might not be interested in anti-aging or wrinkle removal procedures.
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