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What are the most common organizations in your country and what are they for?

작성자: 김*린
2024-09-27 530

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In Korea, Reading club is the most common organizations. It is not only just reading books but also discuss with the theme and Q&A about a book. The club is very normal. There was a club in a elementary, middle, high school, university, even a social. I think there are many people who read a book for duty because of refinement, knowledge. In case of those people, they usually read kinds of classical novel or economic book. On the other hand there are some people who really love to read. They read many kinds of book and also they join in a 'book talk' with author or reader.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey, Lin! Thanks for sharing! It’s interesting how reading clubs are common in all levels of education and society. I like your point about people reading for duty versus pleasure.
~T. Jenna

In Korea, Reading club is the most common organizations. 
>>In Korea, reading clubs are the most common organizations.
OR
>>In Korea, reading clubs are among the most prevalent organizations.
It is not only just reading books but also discuss with the theme and Q&A about a book. 
>>It is not just about reading books but also discussing themes and having Q&A sessions about a book.
OR
>>It’s not merely about reading books; it also involves delving into themes and engaging in Q&A sessions about the material.
The club is very normal. 
Correct, or
>>These clubs are quite commonplace.
There was a club in a elementary, middle, high school, university, even a social. 
>>There are clubs in elementary, middle, and high schools, universities, and even social groups.
I think there are many people who read a book for duty because of refinement, knowledge. 
>>I think there are many people read books out of duty for personal refinement and knowledge.
OR
>>I believe many individuals read out of a sense of duty, striving for personal refinement and knowledge.
In case of those people, they usually read kinds of classical novel or economic book. 
>>In the case of those people, they usually read classical novels or economic books.
OR
>>For such readers, classical novels and economic texts are often the order of the day.
On the other hand there are some people who really love to read. 
>>On the other hand, there are some people who really love to read.
OR
>>Conversely, there are those who are passionate about reading.
They read many kinds of book and also they join in a 'book talk' with author or reader.
>>They read many kinds of books and also join 'book talks' with authors or other readers.
OR
>>They explore a wide variety of books and eagerly participate in 'book talks' with authors and fellow readers.
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