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What\'s the most difficult decision you have made?

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The most difficult decision I made was to apply for the universities. Because I had only 6 tickets to apply for universities, so It took long time to select universities to apply. Majority of high school students want to go to high-level universities in Korea, so it make it high competitive rate. When I was 19, I didn't want to fail to go university, so Selecting the 6 universities was my most difficult decision I made.

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Hello, Betty!
Choosing a university to attend is, in my opinion, quite similar to selecting a company to work for—both require careful thought because of the potential impact on your professional development. I appreciate you sharing your experience :)) 
Chammy

The most difficult decision I made was to apply for the universities.
OR
>> Applying to universities was the hardest choice I had to make.
 Because I had only 6 tickets to apply for universities, so It took long time to select universities to apply.
>>  Because I had only 6 tickets to apply for universities, so It took a long time to select universities to apply.
OR
>> It took me a while to choose which school to apply to because I only had six tickets to enroll in.
 Majority of high school students want to go to high-level universities in Korea, so it make it high competitive rate.
>> The majority of high school students want to go to high-level universities in Korea, so it makes it a highly competitive rate.
 When I was 19, I didn't want to fail to go university, so Selecting the 6 universities was my most difficult decision I made.
>> The hardest decision I had to make when I was 19 was choosing between the six universities since I didn't want to miss out on college.
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